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모범답안 테스크 1 - 4가지 종류의 고등학교 학생수 비율
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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words. |
The table illustrates the percentage of school children attending four different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009. It is evident that whereas the community schools experienced a marked increase in the proportion of those attending their institutions over the period, the others saw a corresponding decline.
To begin, the percentage of pupils in voluntary-controlled schools fell from just over half to only 20% or one fifth from 2000 to 2009. Similarly, the relative number of children in grammar schools - just under one quarter - dropped by half in the same period. As for the specialist schools, the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this type of school (12%) also fell, although not significantly.
However, while the other three types of school declined in importance, the opposite was true in the case of community schools. In fact, whereas only a small minority of 12% were educated in these schools in 2000, this figure increased to well over half of all pupils during the following nine years.
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whereas the community schools...
the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this type of school (12%) also fell...
while the other three types of school... - 숫자와 변화를 다양하게 표현
just over half to only 20% or one fifth from
this figure increased to well over half of all pupils