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모범답안 테스크 1 - 4가지 종류의 고등학교 학생수 비율

Reference https://www.ieltsbuddy.com/task-1-table.html

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

 

Write at least 150 words.

 

Task 1 - Table.PNG.jpg

The table illustrates the percentage of school children attending four different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009. It is evident that whereas the community schools experienced a marked increase in the proportion of those attending their institutions over the period, the others saw a corresponding decline.

 

To begin, the percentage of pupils in voluntary-controlled schools fell from just over half to only 20% or one fifth from 2000 to 2009. Similarly, the relative number of children in grammar schools - just under one quarter - dropped by half in the same period. As for the specialist schools, the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this type of school (12%) also fell, although not significantly.

 

However, while the other three types of school declined in importance, the opposite was true in the case of community schools. In fact, whereas only a small minority of 12% were educated in these schools in 2000, this figure increased to well over half of all pupils during the following nine years.

 

170 Words

 

 

코멘트 -

 

  • 오버뷰가 명확하고 주요한 추세를 보여줌
  • 데이터가 명확하고 일관성있게 정리됨: 처음에는 출석수 감소가 있는 학교들을 설명하고 그 다음에 증가가 있는 학교들을 설명
  • 복잡한 문장들과 구조를 사용: 
    whereas the community schools...
    the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this type of school (12%) also fell...
    while the other three types of school...
  • 숫자와 변화를 다양하게 표현
    just over half to only 20% or one fifth from
    this figure increased to well over half of all pupils

 

 

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