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테스트 2 모답 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #37 음악(Opinion)

IELTS Writing Task 2: Sample writing #37

(주제 : 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : Music)

 

작성자 : BIG JANE(맘잉글리쉬 mom-eng.com)

참조 : ielts-simon.com

 

밴드 7-9 어휘 정리 보러가기 ]

 

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

 

It is often said that music has the power to unite and connect people, regardless of their cultural backgrounds or ages. I completely agree with this view, and will give my reasons below.

 

Music can certainly reach across cultural and national boundaries and bring people together. Perhaps the best example of this would be the Live Aid concerts that took place back in the 1980s, and which were broadcast to a global audience. Two live events were held simultaneously in the UK and the US, and the objective was to raise funds for famine relief in Ethiopia. The concerts were a huge success, both in terms of the number of people around the world who watched them and their impact on international public awareness of the famine. They demonstrated, I believe, that music truly is the planet’s global language.

 

Just as it transcends cultures, music also has the ability to connect people from different generations. Regardless of age, we can all enjoy a memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a beautiful singing voice, and the best songs seem to have the same magical effect on all of us. This would explain why televised music competitions, such as ‘The X Factor’ or ‘The Voice’, are such popular prime-time shows. These programmes attract incredibly broad audiences because singing and popular songs appeal to children, parents and grandparents alike. I would argue that no other form of entertainment can bring families together in this way.

 

In conclusion, I believe that music is unique in its capacity to create shared experiences between people, irrespective of culture and age.

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1등 jungeun 2020.05.04. 08:37
아이엘츠 시험 준비하고 있는 3학년 입니다..잘부탁드립니다????????????
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3등 Meili 2020.08.13. 00:55
⁣고맙습니다
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RnMA 2020.09.02. 21:32
감사합니다! 잘쓰겠습니다!
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len 2021.03.13. 17:55
감사합니다
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