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모범답안 테스크 1 - 브랜필드 도시의 지도
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Map of Brandfield with two proposed sites for a shopping mall
The map illustrates plans for two possible sites for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. It can be seen that the two sites under consideration are in the north and the south east of the town.
The first possible site for the shopping mall, S1, is just north of the city centre, above the railway line, which runs from the south east of the city to the north west. If it is built here, it will be next to a large housing estate, thus providing easy access for those living on the estate and in the city centre. It will also be next to the river that runs through the town.
The site in the south east, S2, is again just by the railway line and fairly close to the city centre, but it is near to an industrial estate rather than housing.
There is a main road that runs through the city and is close to both sites, thus providing good road access to either location. A large golf course and park in the west of the town prevents this area from being available as a site.
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코멘트 -
- 지도를 설명할때는 상대적인 장소와 위치 표현에 집중하세요. 예를 들어, to the left / next to / north of / behind 등
- 지도 문제에서도 오버뷰는 필요 (오버뷰가 없는 경우 Task achievement에서 밴드 5점이상 받기 어렵습니다.)
It can be seen that the two sites under consideration are in the north and the south east of the town. - 잘짜인 구성은 테스크1에서 언제나 중요합니다.
먼저 도시 중심의 북쪽을 설명하고 다른 부분을 설명. 장소에 따라 더 많은 정보를 제공. - 장소와 위치를 설명하는 표현들 사용
just north of the city centre, above the railway line
runs from the south east of the city to the north west
next to
site in the south east
close to both sites
in the west of the town