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  • IELTS Writing Task 2: Sample writing #29

    (주제 : 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #29 Parenting course)

     

    작성자 : BIG JANE(맘잉글리쉬 mom-eng.com)

    참조 : ielts-simon.com

         

    Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

     

    It is true that parents shoulder a huge responsibility and that raising children is by no means an easy task. However, I completely disagree with the idea that we should therefore force all mothers and fathers to attend parenting courses.

     

    In my opinion, the idea that all future parents should take a parenthood preparation course is completely impractical. Many prospective parents have jobs and busy schedules, and they may not be willing or able to attend regular parenting classes. This raises the question of whether those who missed the classes, or perhaps refused to attend, would be punished. I believe that it would be wrong to do this, and it would therefore be impossible to enforce the idea of compulsory training for parents. Besides, even if parents could be forced to attend, I doubt that people would agree on what good parenting entails, and so it would be difficult to create a parenting course to suit everyone.

     

    As well as being impractical, I would argue that training courses for parents are unnecessary. Mothers and fathers have been raising children without any formal help or official interference for thousands of years. Parenting skills are learnt from family members, friends, neighbours and the surrounding culture. Perhaps more importantly, adults learn to be good parents by instinct, by trial and error, and by getting to know their own children; for example, a good parent will try different strategies when faced with a badly-behaved child, and will gradually develop an understanding of what works to correct the behaviour. None of this requires the intervention of a taught course.

     

    In conclusion, while compulsory parenting lessons might seem like a good idea, I believe that such a scheme would be unworkable and largely pointless.

     

    (289 words, band 9)

     

    파란색 = 문제에서 주어진 표현이 본문에서 어떻게 파라프레이징 되는지 배워보세요.

     

    Caring for children -> raising children

    the most important job -> a huge responsibility / by no means an easy task 

    should be required -> force / compulsary 

    take a course -> attend a course

    a course that prepares them to be good parents -> parenting course / a parenthood preparation course / regular parenting classes / training for parents / formal help or official interference / parenting lessons / a taught course

     

    붉은색 = 토픽 관련 어휘

     

    shoulder a huge responsibility 

    큰 책임을 지다

    what good parenting entails

    좋은 육아법이 무엇을 수반하는가

    impractical

    비실용적인

    Parenting skills

    육아법

    the surrounding culture

    주변 문화(환경)

    by instinct

    본능적으로

    by trial and error

    시행착오를 통해

    badly-behaved child

    버릇없는 아이

     

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