아래 예시 편지는 밴드 9.0 정도의 수준이며 문단을 어떻게 구성하고 아이디어를 어떻게 확장해야하는지 잘보여주고 있습니다. 길이가 다소 긴 편인데 이렇게 길게 쓰지 않도록 해야합니다. 항상 170~190 단어 정도로 작성하도록 합니다. 길게 쓰는 것이 점수를 높여주지 않습니다. 

아이엘츠 컴플레인 편지

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to report the faulty TV that I purchased from your company on Tuesday last week.

My name is John Davidson and I am one of your frequent customers. I live in Woodstock and have been using your services and buying your products for the last 11 years.

On Tuesday, 12th June, I visited your store to purchase a TV. I bought a Toshiba LED TV which has the code 40L675B40. On purchasing this TV, I was assured that this was the latest model and the best there was to buy. However, when I got home I discovered that not only did the remote controls not work but also the quality of the picture was not as good as promised, in fact it was quite blurry. I called your customer service department immediately on Tuesday and they assured me that my TV would be replaced or fixed within two days. I am disappointed to say that this has not happened and I have received no communication since then.

I am exceedingly displeased with both the quality of the product I purchased from your company as well as the poor  service I have received since. I hope this problem will be resolved promptly. I expect to receive a replacement TV or have my current TV repaired but only if it could be fixed within a day.

I look forward to hearing back from you immediately.

Yours faithfully,

Mr J H Davidson