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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

     

    The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

     

    Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

     

    Write at least 150 words.

     

     

    Revenue Sources and Expenditures of a USA Charity in one year, 2016.

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    The pie charts show the amount of revenue and expenditures in 2016 for a children’s charity in the USA. Overall, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income, while program services accounted for the most expenditure. Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings.

     

    In detail, donated food provided most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%. Similarly, with regard to expenditures, one category, program services, accounted for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95.8%. 

     

    The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions, which were the second largest revenue source, brought in 10.4% of overall income, and this was followed by program revenue, at 2.2%. Investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of revenue, accounting for only 0.8% combined.

     

    There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. The total amount of income was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53,224,896. 

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    • 파이 차트의 자료를 선택하고 적절하게 잘 요약
    • 문제에서 지시한대로 자료의 비교가 이루어짐- similarly / much smaller / largest revenue source 와 같은 표현들로 명확하게 비교
    • 요약도 잘 구성. 첫 문단에서 각각의 차트에서 가장 큰 두 항목을 비교하고, 두번째/세번째 문단에서 각각 차트의 디테일을 요약
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