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테스트 2 모답 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #30 인공지능((Discussion)

IELTS Writing Task 2: Sample writing #30

(주제 : 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #30 artificial intelligence(인공지능))

 

작성자 : BIG JANE(맘잉글리쉬 mom-eng.com)

참조 : ielts-simon.com

 

Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

 

People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.

 

On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits. Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can, especially in areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. For example, robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than a human doctor, and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves. Such technologies can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors. It is easy to imagine how these developments, and many others, will steadily improve our quality of life.

 

On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful. In the short term, it is likely that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software programs. For example, self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving jobs, such as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. In the medium term, if intelligent technologies gradually take jobs away from humans, we may find that people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life. A longer term fear is that computers become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight and without regard for our well-being.

 

In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.

 

(295 words, band 9)

 

밴드 7-9 어휘와 표현

 

  • the future impact of
    미래의 충격
  • the two opposing points of view
    두개의 상반된 관점
  • I am both fascinated and apprehensive about...
    ~관해 매혹적이면서도 걱정된다. 
  • bring some obvious benefits
    분명한 이점들을 가져온다
  • high levels of accuracy
    높은 정확성
  • calculations using large amounts of data
    많은 양의 데이터를 사용한 계산
  • carry out surgical procedures
    수술 과정을 수행하다
  • with greater precision
    훨씬 더 정확하게
  • reducing the likelihood of
    가능성을 줄이다
  • human errors
    사람의 실수
  • steadily improve our quality of life
    꾸준히 우리 삶의 질을 향상 시킨다
  • I share the concerns of people who...
    ~한 사람들의 우려를 공유한다.
  • in the short / medium / long term
    단기 / 중기/ 장기적으로
  • a rise in unemployment
    실업률의 증가
  • in various industries
    다양한 분야에서
  • are replaced by software programs
    소프트웨어로 대체되다. 
  • self-driving vehicles
    자율 운전 차량들
  • cause redundancies
    정리해고를 초래하다
  • become deskilled
    기술을 잃어버린다
  • lose their sense of purpose
    목적의식을 잃어버린다
  • a longer term fear
    장기적인 공포
  • without human oversight
    사람의 감독없이
  • without regard for
    ~ 고려하지 않고
  • our well-being
    우리의 행복(웰빙)
  • the potential risks
    잠재적 위험
  • should not be ignored
    간과되어선 안된다.

 

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1등 맘잉글리쉬 작성자 2018.12.13. 14:04
사이먼의 라이팅 샘플은 정말 군더더기가 없고 매끄러우면서도 좋은 표현으로 가득하죠.

여러가지 샘플 라이팅 보시지 말라고 강력하게 권하고 싶습니다.
부자연스럽게 어려운 어휘만 쓰고 글 구성도 매끄럽지 않은 경우가 너무 많아요.

편견일지도 모르지만 제가 봐온 한국 교재나 한국 분들이 가지고 있는 에세이들 문제가 많습니다.
새로운 자료 찾지 마시고 좋은 것을 두번 세번 보세요.

한번 볼때 배울 수 있는게 있고 두번봐야 보이는 것이 있고 나중에 또 보면 또 배울 것이 있습니다.
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2등 ㅇㅇ 2019.03.13. 17:48
늘도움받숩닏니다
감사합니다
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hwasu31 2020.08.04. 21:06
이전에 다른 사이트 이용했었는데 여기가 훨씬 좋아요. 맘잉이 짱이에요. 공부의욕이 막 생기네요. 감사합니다!
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RnMA 2020.09.03. 21:31
감사합니다!
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ju1478 2020.10.25. 15:07
좋은 자료 감사합니다
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