- 아이엘츠 라이팅 9.0 샘플 #30 주제 _ 'artificial intelligence(인공지능)' - IELTS 라이팅 TASK2 [9.0 샘플] - 맘잉글리쉬.pdf (File Size: 527.1KB/Download: 8)
IELTS Writing Task 2: Sample writing #30
(주제 : 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #30 artificial intelligence(인공지능))
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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.
On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits. Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can, especially in areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. For example, robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than a human doctor, and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves. Such technologies can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors. It is easy to imagine how these developments, and many others, will steadily improve our quality of life.
On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful. In the short term, it is likely that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software programs. For example, self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving jobs, such as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. In the medium term, if intelligent technologies gradually take jobs away from humans, we may find that people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life. A longer term fear is that computers become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight and without regard for our well-being.
In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.
(295 words, band 9)
밴드 7-9 어휘와 표현
- the future impact of
- the two opposing points of view
두개의 상반된 관점
- I am both fascinated and apprehensive about...
~관해 매혹적이면서도 걱정된다.
- bring some obvious benefits
분명한 이점들을 가져온다
- high levels of accuracy
- calculations using large amounts of data
많은 양의 데이터를 사용한 계산
- carry out surgical procedures
수술 과정을 수행하다
- with greater precision
훨씬 더 정확하게
- reducing the likelihood of
- human errors
- steadily improve our quality of life
꾸준히 우리 삶의 질을 향상 시킨다
- I share the concerns of people who...
~한 사람들의 우려를 공유한다.
- in the short / medium / long term
단기 / 중기/ 장기적으로
- a rise in unemployment
- in various industries
- are replaced by software programs
- self-driving vehicles
자율 운전 차량들
- cause redundancies
- become deskilled
- lose their sense of purpose
- a longer term fear
- without human oversight
- without regard for
~ 고려하지 않고
- our well-being
- the potential risks
- should not be ignored