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IELTS Writing Task 2
(아이엘츠 라이팅 강좌 #36 : '핵가족(Small families)' 플래닝)
작성자 : BIG JANE(맘잉글리쉬 mom-eng.com)
참조 : ielts-simon.com
In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
한쪽에 완전히 치운친 의견(Strong opinion)을 위한 플랜은 아래와 같다.
위와 같은 플래닝을 토대로 글의 구조를 잡아보자.
It is true that cities are seeing a rise in smaller families and one-person households, while the extended family is becoming a rarity. In my opinion, this is a negative development.
Paragraph 2, topic sentence (본론 1의 첫 문장 (핵심 문장)
As families become smaller, the traditional family support network is disappearing, and this can have a negative impact on children as they grow up.
Paragraph 3, topic sentence (본론 2의 첫 문장 (핵심 문장)
The trend towards people living alone is perhaps even more damaging because of the psychological effects of reduced human interaction.
In conclusion, I believe that individuals thrive when they are part of larger family groups, and so it is worrying that many people are choosing to live alone or in such small family units.