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Describe something you own that you want to replace
You should say:
What it is
Where it is
How you got it
And explain why you want to replace it
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Describe something you own that you want to replace.
You should say what it is where it is how you got it and explain why you want to replace it.
You should say what it is where it is how you got it and explain why you want to replace it.
One item that I own and am considering replacing is my laptop.
It's an older model that I bought five years ago for a university work. Currently,
it sits on my desk at home where I use it primarily for personal projects and occasionally for freelance work.
I originally bought it took from an electronic store during a back-to-school sale.
The main reason I want to replace my laptop is it's declining performance. Over the years,
it has become increasingly slow, particularly when running multiple applications or processing large files.
The battery life has also significantly worsened, barely lasting an hour without being plugged in. These issues hinder my productivity, especially when I need to work remotely or travel.
It's an older model that I bought five years ago for a university work. Currently,
it sits on my desk at home where I use it primarily for personal projects and occasionally for freelance work.
I originally bought it took from an electronic store during a back-to-school sale.
The main reason I want to replace my laptop is it's declining performance. Over the years,
it has become increasingly slow, particularly when running multiple applications or processing large files.
The battery life has also significantly worsened, barely lasting an hour without being plugged in. These issues hinder my productivity, especially when I need to work remotely or travel.
Furthermore, as a freelance graphic designer,
I rely heavily on my laptop for all my design work. The outdated hardware limits my ability to use newer software efficiently, which is critical for staying competitive in my field. The screen resolution and color accuracy are no longer up to industry standards, which affects the quality of my work. Replacing my old laptop with a newer model would not only improve my efficiency
but also enhance the quality of my designs. it would provide a faster processor, better graphics capabilities and improve battery life allowing me to work more effectively from anywhere.
I rely heavily on my laptop for all my design work. The outdated hardware limits my ability to use newer software efficiently, which is critical for staying competitive in my field. The screen resolution and color accuracy are no longer up to industry standards, which affects the quality of my work. Replacing my old laptop with a newer model would not only improve my efficiency
but also enhance the quality of my designs. it would provide a faster processor, better graphics capabilities and improve battery life allowing me to work more effectively from anywhere.
I feel somewhat nostalgic about replacing this laptop because it has served me well through my university years and the early stages of my career.
However, I recognize that upgrading is necessary for my professional growth and to maintain the standard of work my clients expect.
However, I recognize that upgrading is necessary for my professional growth and to maintain the standard of work my clients expect.
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Describe something you own that you want to replace.
You should say what it is where it is is, how you got it and explain why you want to replace it? One item that I own and am am I considering replacing is my laptop.
It's an older model that I bought five years ago for a university work on currently.
It's it's It's its on my desk at home where I use it primarily for personal projects and occasionally for freelance work.
I originally bought it it, took from an electronic store during a back-to-school sale.
The main reason I want to replace my laptop is it's declining performance over the years.
It has become increasingly easy slow particularly when running multiple applications or processing large files.
The battery life has also significantly worsened barely lasting an hour without being plugged in these issues hinder my productivity, especially when I need to work remotely or travel.
Furthermore Furthermore, as a freelance graphic designer.
I Rely rely heavily on my laptop for all my design work the outdated Hardware limits my ability to use New Jersey or software efficiently, which is critical for staying competitive in my field the screen resolution and color accuracy are no longer up to Industry standards, which affects the quality of my work replacing my old laptop with a newer model would not only improve my efficiency.
But also enhance the quality of my designs, it would provide a faster processor better graphics capabilities and improve battery life life, allowing me to work more effectively from anywhere.
I feel somewhat nostalgic about replacing this laptop because it has served me well through my University years and the early stages of my career.
However, I recognize that upgrading is necessary for my professional growth and to maintain the standard of my work my clients expect off.
You should say what it is where it is is, how you got it and explain why you want to replace it? One item that I own and am am I considering replacing is my laptop.
It's an older model that I bought five years ago for a university work on currently.
It's it's It's its on my desk at home where I use it primarily for personal projects and occasionally for freelance work.
I originally bought it it, took from an electronic store during a back-to-school sale.
The main reason I want to replace my laptop is it's declining performance over the years.
It has become increasingly easy slow particularly when running multiple applications or processing large files.
The battery life has also significantly worsened barely lasting an hour without being plugged in these issues hinder my productivity, especially when I need to work remotely or travel.
Furthermore Furthermore, as a freelance graphic designer.
I Rely rely heavily on my laptop for all my design work the outdated Hardware limits my ability to use New Jersey or software efficiently, which is critical for staying competitive in my field the screen resolution and color accuracy are no longer up to Industry standards, which affects the quality of my work replacing my old laptop with a newer model would not only improve my efficiency.
But also enhance the quality of my designs, it would provide a faster processor better graphics capabilities and improve battery life life, allowing me to work more effectively from anywhere.
I feel somewhat nostalgic about replacing this laptop because it has served me well through my University years and the early stages of my career.
However, I recognize that upgrading is necessary for my professional growth and to maintain the standard of my work my clients expect off.
제가 소유하고 있고 교체를 고려 중인 물품 중 하나는 노트북입니다. 5년 전에 대학 과제를 위해 구입한 구형 모델입니다. 현재는 집 책상 위에 놓아두고 주로 개인 프로젝트에 사용하고 가끔 프리랜서 작업에도 사용하고 있습니다. 원래는 신학기 세일 기간에 전자제품 매장에서 구입했습니다.
노트북을 교체하려는 가장 큰 이유는 성능 저하 때문입니다. 수년에 걸쳐 특히 여러 애플리케이션을 실행하거나 대용량 파일을 처리할 때 속도가 점점 느려졌습니다. 배터리 수명도 크게 악화되어 전원을 연결하지 않으면 한 시간도 버티지 못합니다. 이러한 문제는 특히 원격으로 작업하거나 여행해야 할 때 생산성을 저해합니다.
게다가 저는 프리랜서 그래픽 디자이너로서 모든 디자인 작업을 노트북에 크게 의존하고 있습니다. 구식 하드웨어는 제 분야에서 경쟁력을 유지하는 데 필수적인 최신 소프트웨어를 효율적으로 사용하는 데 제한이 있습니다. 화면 해상도와 색 정확도가 더 이상 업계 표준에 미치지 못해 작업 품질에 영향을 미칩니다.
오래된 노트북을 최신 모델로 교체하면 효율성이 향상될 뿐만 아니라 디자인 품질도 향상될 것입니다. 더 빠른 프로세서, 더 나은 그래픽 기능, 향상된 배터리 수명을 제공하여 어디서든 더 효과적으로 작업할 수 있을 것입니다.
이 노트북은 대학 시절과 경력 초창기까지 제게 많은 도움을 주었기 때문에 교체에 대한 향수가 느껴지기도 합니다. 하지만 제 직업적 성장과 고객이 기대하는 업무 수준을 유지하기 위해서는 업그레이드가 필요하다는 것을 잘 알고 있습니다.
노트북을 교체하려는 가장 큰 이유는 성능 저하 때문입니다. 수년에 걸쳐 특히 여러 애플리케이션을 실행하거나 대용량 파일을 처리할 때 속도가 점점 느려졌습니다. 배터리 수명도 크게 악화되어 전원을 연결하지 않으면 한 시간도 버티지 못합니다. 이러한 문제는 특히 원격으로 작업하거나 여행해야 할 때 생산성을 저해합니다.
게다가 저는 프리랜서 그래픽 디자이너로서 모든 디자인 작업을 노트북에 크게 의존하고 있습니다. 구식 하드웨어는 제 분야에서 경쟁력을 유지하는 데 필수적인 최신 소프트웨어를 효율적으로 사용하는 데 제한이 있습니다. 화면 해상도와 색 정확도가 더 이상 업계 표준에 미치지 못해 작업 품질에 영향을 미칩니다.
오래된 노트북을 최신 모델로 교체하면 효율성이 향상될 뿐만 아니라 디자인 품질도 향상될 것입니다. 더 빠른 프로세서, 더 나은 그래픽 기능, 향상된 배터리 수명을 제공하여 어디서든 더 효과적으로 작업할 수 있을 것입니다.
이 노트북은 대학 시절과 경력 초창기까지 제게 많은 도움을 주었기 때문에 교체에 대한 향수가 느껴지기도 합니다. 하지만 제 직업적 성장과 고객이 기대하는 업무 수준을 유지하기 위해서는 업그레이드가 필요하다는 것을 잘 알고 있습니다.
Band 7-9 Expressions
Older model - 구형 모델Declining performance - 성능 저하
Battery life - 배터리 수명
Hinder my productivity - 생산성을 저해하다
Freelance graphic designer - 프리랜스 그래픽 디자이너
Outdated hardware - 구식 하드웨어
Industry standards - 업계 표준
Nostalgic - 향수를 불러일으키는
Professional growth - 전문적 성장
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Describe something you own that you want to replace
Describe something you own that you want to replace
You should say:
What it is
Where it is
How you got it
And explain why you want to replace it
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You should say:
What it is
Where it is
How you got it
And explain why you want to replace it
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