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What’s the difference between adults’ and childrens’ happiness?

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What's the difference between adults and children's happiness?
Adults happiness is often more complex and tied to achievements, relationships and personal fulfillment,
whereas children's happiness is usually more immediate and based on their moment-to-moment experiences. Adults may seek long-term goals for happiness, while children find joy in simpler, everyday activities.
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What's the difference between adults and children's happiness? Adults happiness is often more complex and tied to achievements achievements, relationships and personal fulfillment.
Whereas children's happiness is usually more immediate and based on their moment-to-moment experiences adults, May seek long-term goals for happiness while children find joy in simpler everyday activities.
어른의 행복은 종종 더 복잡하고 성취, 관계, 개인적인 성취감과 관련이 있는 반면, 어린이의 행복은 대개 더 즉각적이고 순간순간의 경험에 기반합니다. 성인은 행복을 위해 장기적인 목표를 추구하지만, 어린이는 보다 단순한 일상 활동에서 기쁨을 찾습니다.
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Complex and tied to achievements - 복잡하고 성취와 관련된
Personal fulfillment - 개인적인 성취감
Immediate and based on moment-to-moment experiences - 즉각적이고 순간의 경험에 기반한
Long-term goals for happiness - 행복을 위한 장기적인 목표
Simpler, everyday activities - 더 단순한 일상 활동
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What’s the difference between adults’ and childrens’ happiness?

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