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Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal
You should say:
Who the person is
How he / she encouraged you
What goal you achieved
And explain how you feel about this person
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Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal.
You should say who the person is how he or she encouraged you what goal you achieved and accomplished how you feel about this person.
You should say who the person is how he or she encouraged you what goal you achieved and accomplished how you feel about this person.
A person who has been instrumental in encouraging me to achieve
my goals is my high school basketball coach, Mr. Thomason. During my senior year,
he pushed me to hone my skills and strive for a sports scholarship which had been my dream since I joined the team.
Mr.
Thomason encouraged me by providing extra training sessions after school and constantly reinforcing the importance of discipline and perseverance. With his guidance,
I improved significantly and ultimately secured a scholarship to play basketball at a university.
my goals is my high school basketball coach, Mr. Thomason. During my senior year,
he pushed me to hone my skills and strive for a sports scholarship which had been my dream since I joined the team.
Mr.
Thomason encouraged me by providing extra training sessions after school and constantly reinforcing the importance of discipline and perseverance. With his guidance,
I improved significantly and ultimately secured a scholarship to play basketball at a university.
My feelings towards Mr. Thompson are of deep respect and gratitude. His belief in my abilities and his unwavering support not only helped me achieve my goal, but also taught me valuable lessons about hard work and dedication.
He was more than a coach.
He was a mentor who genuinely cared about my personal growth.
He was more than a coach.
He was a mentor who genuinely cared about my personal growth.
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Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal.
You should say who the person is how he or she encouraged you what goal you achieved and accomplished how you feel about this person? A person who has been instrumental in encouraging me to achieve.
My goals is are my high school basketball coach coach, Mister Thomason during my senior year.
He pushed me to hone my skills and strive for a sports scholarship scholarship, which had been my dream since I joined the team.
Mr.
Thomason encouraged me by providing extra track sessions after school and constantly reinforcing the importance of discipline and perseverance with his guidance.
I improved significantly and ultimately secured a scholarship to play basketball at the University.
My feelings towards Mister Thompson are of deep respect and gratitude his belief in my abilities and his unwavering support not only helped me achieve my goal, but also taught me valuable lessons about hard work and dedication.
He was more than a coach.
He was a mentor who genuinely cared about my personal growth.
You should say who the person is how he or she encouraged you what goal you achieved and accomplished how you feel about this person? A person who has been instrumental in encouraging me to achieve.
My goals is are my high school basketball coach coach, Mister Thomason during my senior year.
He pushed me to hone my skills and strive for a sports scholarship scholarship, which had been my dream since I joined the team.
Mr.
Thomason encouraged me by providing extra track sessions after school and constantly reinforcing the importance of discipline and perseverance with his guidance.
I improved significantly and ultimately secured a scholarship to play basketball at the University.
My feelings towards Mister Thompson are of deep respect and gratitude his belief in my abilities and his unwavering support not only helped me achieve my goal, but also taught me valuable lessons about hard work and dedication.
He was more than a coach.
He was a mentor who genuinely cared about my personal growth.
제가 목표를 달성하는 데 큰 힘이 되어준 사람은 고등학교 농구 코치인 톰슨 선생님입니다. 고등학교 3학년 때 코치님은 제가 팀에 합류할 때부터 제 꿈이었던 스포츠 장학금을 받기 위해 기술을 연마하고 노력하도록 밀어주셨어요.
톰슨 코치님은 방과 후 추가 훈련 세션을 제공하고 훈련과 인내의 중요성을 끊임없이 강조하며 저를 격려해 주셨어요. 그의 지도 아래 저는 크게 발전했고 결국 대학에서 농구를 할 수 있는 장학금을 받을 수 있었습니다.
톰슨 선생님에 대한 저의 감정은 깊은 존경과 감사입니다. 제 능력에 대한 그의 믿음과 변함없는 지원은 제가 목표를 달성하는 데 도움이 되었을 뿐만 아니라 노력과 헌신에 대한 소중한 인생 교훈도 가르쳐 주었습니다. 그는 코치 그 이상이었으며 저의 개인적인 성장에 진심으로 관심을 가져준 멘토였습니다.
톰슨 코치님은 방과 후 추가 훈련 세션을 제공하고 훈련과 인내의 중요성을 끊임없이 강조하며 저를 격려해 주셨어요. 그의 지도 아래 저는 크게 발전했고 결국 대학에서 농구를 할 수 있는 장학금을 받을 수 있었습니다.
톰슨 선생님에 대한 저의 감정은 깊은 존경과 감사입니다. 제 능력에 대한 그의 믿음과 변함없는 지원은 제가 목표를 달성하는 데 도움이 되었을 뿐만 아니라 노력과 헌신에 대한 소중한 인생 교훈도 가르쳐 주었습니다. 그는 코치 그 이상이었으며 저의 개인적인 성장에 진심으로 관심을 가져준 멘토였습니다.
Band 7-9 Expressions
Instrumental - 결정적인Hone my skills - 기술을 연마하다
Sports scholarship - 스포츠 장학금
Discipline and perseverance - 규율과 인내
Unwavering support - 흔들림 없는 지지
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Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal
Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal
You should say:
Who the person is
How he / she encouraged you
What goal you achieved
And explain how you feel about this person
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Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal
You should say:
Who the person is
How he / she encouraged you
What goal you achieved
And explain how you feel about this person
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