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Describe someone you who made a good decision recently
You should say:
Who he / she is
When he / she made the decision
What decision he / she made
Why it was a good decision
And explain how you felt about the decision
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Describe someone you know who made a good decision recently.
You should say who he or she is when he or she made the decision what decision he or she made why it was a good decision and explain how you felt about the decision.
You should say who he or she is when he or she made the decision what decision he or she made why it was a good decision and explain how you felt about the decision.
A friend of mine Sarah, made a significant and commendable decision recently. About three months ago,
She decided to switch her career from a corporate job in marketing to becoming a freelance graphic designer, which has been her passion for years. Sarah chose to pursue what truly made her happy rather than staying in a secure but unfulfilling job.
She realized that her creative skills and love for design could turn into a viable career path.
The decision was tough, considering the unpredictable nature of freelance work, but she took calculated risks by saving up and planning her transition carefully.
I felt incredibly proud and inspired by her decision.
It showed courage and a strong commitment to her personal happiness and professional fulfillment.
She decided to switch her career from a corporate job in marketing to becoming a freelance graphic designer, which has been her passion for years. Sarah chose to pursue what truly made her happy rather than staying in a secure but unfulfilling job.
She realized that her creative skills and love for design could turn into a viable career path.
The decision was tough, considering the unpredictable nature of freelance work, but she took calculated risks by saving up and planning her transition carefully.
I felt incredibly proud and inspired by her decision.
It showed courage and a strong commitment to her personal happiness and professional fulfillment.
Watching her thrive and grow in her new career path has been uplifting and it reinforces the belief that following one's passion can lead to greater satisfaction.
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Describe someone you know who made a good decision recently.
You should say who he or she is when he or she made the decision what decision he or she made why it was a good decision and explain how you felt about the decision.
A friend of mine Sarah made a significant and commendable decision recently about three months ago.
She decided to switch her career from a corporate job in marketing to becoming a freelance graphic designer, which has been her passion for years Sarah chose to pursue what truly made her happy rather than staying in a secure but unfulfilling job.
She realized that her creative skills and love for design could turn into a viable career path.
The decision was tough considering the unpredictable nature of freelance work, but she took calculated risks by saving up and planning her transition careful.
I felt incredibly proud and inspired by her decision.
It showed courage and a strong commitment to her personal happiness and professional fulfillment.
Watching her Thrive thrive and grow in her new career path has been uplifting and , and it reinforces the belief that following one's passion can lead to Greater satisfaction.
You should say who he or she is when he or she made the decision what decision he or she made why it was a good decision and explain how you felt about the decision.
A friend of mine Sarah made a significant and commendable decision recently about three months ago.
She decided to switch her career from a corporate job in marketing to becoming a freelance graphic designer, which has been her passion for years Sarah chose to pursue what truly made her happy rather than staying in a secure but unfulfilling job.
She realized that her creative skills and love for design could turn into a viable career path.
The decision was tough considering the unpredictable nature of freelance work, but she took calculated risks by saving up and planning her transition careful.
I felt incredibly proud and inspired by her decision.
It showed courage and a strong commitment to her personal happiness and professional fulfillment.
Watching her Thrive thrive and grow in her new career path has been uplifting and , and it reinforces the belief that following one's passion can lead to Greater satisfaction.
제 친구인 Sarah는 최근 매우 의미 있고 칭찬할 만한 결정을 내렸습니다. 약 3개월 전, 그녀는 마케팅 분야에서 일하던 회사에서 프리랜서 그래픽 디자이너로 진로를 바꾸기로 결정했습니다.
Sarah는 안정적이지만 만족스럽지 못한 직장에 머무르는 대신 자신을 진정으로 행복하게 하는 일을 추구하기로 결정했습니다. 그녀는 자신의 창의적인 기술과 디자인에 대한 애정이 실현 가능한 커리어 경로가 될 수 있다는 것을 깨달았습니다. 예측할 수 없는 프리랜서 업무의 특성을 고려하면 어려운 결정이었지만, 그녀는 신중하게 저축하고 전환을 계획함으로써 계산된 위험을 감수했습니다.
저는 그녀의 결정에 큰 자부심과 영감을 받았습니다. 개인적인 행복과 직업적 성취에 대한 그녀의 용기와 강한 의지를 엿볼 수 있었죠. 새로운 커리어 경로에서 번창하고 성장하는 그녀의 모습을 지켜보면서 열정을 따르는 것이 더 큰 만족으로 이어질 수 있다는 믿음이 더욱 확고해졌습니다.
Sarah는 안정적이지만 만족스럽지 못한 직장에 머무르는 대신 자신을 진정으로 행복하게 하는 일을 추구하기로 결정했습니다. 그녀는 자신의 창의적인 기술과 디자인에 대한 애정이 실현 가능한 커리어 경로가 될 수 있다는 것을 깨달았습니다. 예측할 수 없는 프리랜서 업무의 특성을 고려하면 어려운 결정이었지만, 그녀는 신중하게 저축하고 전환을 계획함으로써 계산된 위험을 감수했습니다.
저는 그녀의 결정에 큰 자부심과 영감을 받았습니다. 개인적인 행복과 직업적 성취에 대한 그녀의 용기와 강한 의지를 엿볼 수 있었죠. 새로운 커리어 경로에서 번창하고 성장하는 그녀의 모습을 지켜보면서 열정을 따르는 것이 더 큰 만족으로 이어질 수 있다는 믿음이 더욱 확고해졌습니다.
Band 7-9 Expressions
Commendable decision - 칭찬할 만한 결정Freelance graphic designer - 프리랜서 그래픽 디자이너
Calculated risks - 계산된 위험
Professional fulfillment - 전문적인 만족
Following one's passion - 자신의 열정을 따르다
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Describe someone you who made a good decision recently
Describe someone you who made a good decision recently
You should say:
Who he / she is
When he / she made the decision
What decision he / she made
Why it was a good decision
And explain how you felt about the decision
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Describe someone you who made a good decision recently
You should say:
Who he / she is
When he / she made the decision
What decision he / she made
Why it was a good decision
And explain how you felt about the decision
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