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Has old people's quality of life improved when compared to the past?

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Has all people's quality of life improved when compared to the past?
Generally, the quality of life for older people has improved compared to the past, thanks to advancements in healthcare, technology and increased awareness of senior needs and rights. Better medical care, more accessible facilities and social support systems contribute to enhanced well-being and longevity.
However, challenges like isolation and ageism still exist, requiring ongoing societal attention.
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Has all people's quality of life improved when compared to the Past.
Generally, the quality of life for older people has improved compared to the Past thanks to advancements in healthcare technology and increased awareness of senior needs and rights better Medical Care More accessible facilities and social support systems contribute to enhanced well-being and Longevity.
However, challenges like isolation and ageism still exist exist, requiring ongoing societal attention.
일반적으로 의료와 기술의 발전, 노인의 필요와 권리에 대한 인식이 높아진 덕분에 노인의 삶의 질은 과거에 비해 향상되었습니다. 더 나은 의료 서비스, 접근성 높은 시설, 사회적 지원 시스템이 웰빙과 수명 연장에 기여하고 있습니다. 하지만 고립감이나 연령 차별과 같은 문제는 여전히 존재하므로 지속적인 사회적 관심이 필요합니다.
Band 7-9 Expressions
Advancements - 발전
Healthcare - 건강 관리
Longevity - 장수
Isolation - 고립
Ageism - 연령 차별
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