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Describe an advertisement you don’t like
You should say:
Where and when you first saw it
What type of advertisement it is
What product or service it advertises
And explain why you don’t like it

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Describe an advertisement
you don't like. You should say, where
and when you first saw it, what type of advertisement it is, what product or service it advertises and explain why you don't like it.
An advertisement that I don't like is a TV commercial for a weight loss supplement
that I first saw a few months ago. The advertisement was airing during a primetime show that I was watching.
It was a thirty-second commercial which started with a before and after picture of a woman who lost a significant amount of weight and went on to claim that the supplement was responsible for her weight loss.
The commercial was promoting a weight loss supplement, which is a type of dietary supplement that is supposed to help people lose weight.
The commercial was heavily focused on the before and after images of the woman, who was shown to be unhappy and overweight before taking the supplement and then slim and happy after taking it. I don't like this advertisement because it promotes unrealistic expectations and suggests that weight loss can be achieved easily and quickly.
Furthermore, the advertisement does not disclose the potential side effects of the supplement, and it does not provide any scientific evidence to support its claims.
Additionally, the advertisement is also objectifying the woman by showing her before and after image and linking her happiness to her weight loss.
Overall, I find this commercial to be misleading and irresponsible, and I believe it can be harmful for people who may be struggling with weight loss or body image issues.
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Describe an advertisement.
You don't like like, you should say where.
And when you first saw it, what type of advertisement it is what product or service, it advertised choices and explain why you don't like it.
An advertisement that I don't like is a TV commercial for a weight loss supplement.
That I first saw a few months ago, the advertisement was off during a Primetime Prime time show that I was watching.
It was a thirty-second commercial which started with a before and after picture of a woman who lost a significant amount of weight and went on to claim that the supplement was responsible for her weight loss.
The commercial was promoting a weight loss supplement supplement, which is a type of dietary supplement, that is supposed to help people lose weight.
The commercial was heavily focused on the before and after images of the woman who was shown to be unhappy and overweight before taking the supplement and then slim and not happy after taking it, I don't like this advertisement because it promotes unrealistic expectations and suggests that weight loss can be achieved easily and quickly.
Furthermore, the advertisement does not disclose the potential side effects of the supplement and , and it does not provide any scientific evidence to support its claims.
Additionally, the advertisement is also objectifying The Woman by showing her before and after image and blinking, her happiness to her weight loss loss loss.
Overall, I find this commercial to be misleading and irresponsible and , and I believe it can be harmful for people who may be struggling with weight loss body image issues.
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Describe an advertisement you don’t like
You should say:
Where and when you first saw it
What type of advertisement it is
What product or service it advertises
And explain why you don’t like it

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Describe an advertisement you don’t like
You should say:
Where and when you first saw it
What type of advertisement it is
What product or service it advertises
And explain why you don’t like it

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