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Are those people who like dangerous activities more likely to be successful?

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ScoreFactoryielts2022_9-12_p2q25p3_Are those people who like dangerous activities more likely to be successful
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No, because dangerous activities tend to result in fatalities or extreme circumstances that are impossible to overcome. When people take huge risks, there is a fifty-fifty chance of winning, which means half the time, they can lose.
So if they put their lives at stake, like in extreme sports, there is a huge possibility that they will lose them.
I have seen many reports of people falling to their deaths because they went skydiving and the parachute didn't open.
For me, being successful means you live to enjoy the fruits of your labor.
So, engaging in risky activities is not equal to success.
However, if you are too afraid to take chances, you will be stuck in one place and won't achieve anything.
I think people who are too scared to try never succeed.
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No, because dangerous activities tend to result in fatalities or extreme circumstances that are impossible to overcome when people take huge risks, there is a fifty-fifty chance of winning, which means half the time they can lose.
So if they put their lives at stake like in extreme sports package, there is a huge possibility that they will lose them.
I have seen many reports of people falling to their deaths because they went skydiving and the parachute thousand a thousand open for me.
Being successful means you live to enjoy the fruits of your labor.
So, engaging in Risky activities is not equal to success.
However, if you are too afraid to take chances, you will be stopped in one place and won't achieve anything.
I think people who are too scared to try never succeed.
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