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Describe a time when you received money as a gift
You should say:
When it happened
Who gave you money
Why he/she gave you money
And explain how you used the money

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Let me tell you about a particular time when I receive cash as a present. In my recollection, it happened way back in my childhood.
I guess I was about ten years old at that time and it was during New Year's Day or in Korea, we say Seol Nal.
Speaking of the person who gave me the money, it was my father. He was in his mid-40s at that time.
In terms of appearance, he has seen to age well because he's still healthy and fit as he was at that time.
Although his parenting style is a bit strict, he's loving and caring to us. Giving money as a gift is a kind of custom in my country, especially during holidays.
The traditional meaning of it is generally about fortune, good health, and success.
This was a particularly meaningful and unforgettable time for me
because the money that my father gave was big enough to buy a phone.
Of course, I didn't know it until I open the envelope.
Obviously, I spend the money to buy my first phone.
Before that, I'd been requesting a phone from my parents because my peers already had theirs and I thought it would be useful for communication.
I did all the house chores and home errands to let them know that I was responsible enough to have my own phone. And it all came to fruition with a gift my dad gave me.

We went to the store the day after and the rest is history.
I deeply appreciated my parents' love and trust in me.
Well, this is everything about the cash I got as a gift.
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Let me tell you about a particular time when I receive cash as a present in my recollection, it happened way back in my childhood.
I guess I was about ten years old at that time and , and it was during New Year's Day or or, in Korea, we say, Sol.
Speaking of the person who gave me the money off, it was my father, he was in his mid-forties at that time.
In terms of appearance, he has seen to age well because he's still healthy and fit as he was at that time.
Although his parenting style is a bit strict, he's loving and caring to us giving money as a gift is a kind of Costco in my country especially , especially during holidays.
The traditional meaning of it is generally about Fortune good health and success.
This was a particularly meaningful and Unforgettable time for me.
Because the money that my father gave was big enough to buy a phone.
Of course, I didn't know it until I open the envelope.
Obviously, I spend the money to buy my first phone.
Before that, I'd been requesting a phone from my parents home because my peers already had theirs and , and I thought it would be useful for communication.
I did all the house chores and home errands to let them know that I was responsible enough to have my own phone and , and it all came to fruition with a gift.
My dad gave me.
We went to the store the day after and the rest is history.
I deeply appreciated my parents parent's love and trust in me.
Well, this is everything about the cash I got as a gift.
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Describe a time when you received money as a gift
You should say:
When it happened
Who gave you money
Why he/she gave you money
And explain how you used the money

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Describe a time when you received money as a gift
You should say:
When it happened
Who gave you money
Why he/she gave you money
And explain how you used the money

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