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Should parents reward children with money?

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This can be a double-edged sword.
On the one hand, when kids receive money for their behavior, they will feel that they've accomplished something. For some kinds, tangible rewards
like money can make them feel more motivated to act appropriately. They will realize that good behavior and money are connected.
On the other hand, it might not work out because it puts money ahead of personal relationships.
Instead of the child seeing how their actions might hurt or benefit others,
they will only see the negative or positive effect of it on their earnings.
Money as a reward will deprive them of the chance to connect with others
in ways that foster good mental and emotional health.
In other words, parents must approach this topic
with caution.
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This can be a double-edged sword.
On the one hand, when kids receive money for their behavior, they will feel that they've accomplished something for some kinds tangible of tangible rewards.
Like money can make them feel more motivated to act appropriately, they will realize that good behavior and money are connected.
On the other hand, it might not work out because it puts money ahead of personal relationships.
Instead of the child seeing how their actions might hurt or benefit others.
They will only see the negative or positive effect of it on their earnings money.
As a reward reward, will not deprive them of the chance to connect with others.
In ways that Foster a good mental and emotional health.
In other words, parents must approach this month.
With caution.
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