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Do people often celebrate festivals with families?

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yes. What I'm trying to say is that festivals are historically made to make communities closer and encouraging familiarity.
Take, for example, in Korea festivals like Cherry Blossom Festival and Mid-autumn Festival or Chuseok, which are best spent with family. Walking around the park while enjoying the breathtaking scenery of cherry blossom
trees is the most common family activity in my country. Some people go on a picnic or travel to the countryside to have an experienced.
The bottom line is that festivals give families an avenue to have quality time together.
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Yes, what I'm trying to say is that festivals are are, historically, made to make communities closer and encouraging familiarity.
Take, for example, in Korea festivals, like Cherry Blossom Festival and mid-autumn festival or chuseok cause, which are best spent with family walking around the park, while enjoying the breathtaking scenery of cherry blossom.
Trees is are the most common family activity in my country country, with some people go on a picnic or travel to the countryside to have an experienced.
The bottom line is that festivals give families and an Avenue to have quality time together.
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