Model Answer

What habits should children have?

담기
댓글
아이엘츠뿌게자!QpJISiZi7k
댓글 등록
I think cleaning up after themselves should be part of their development.
This habit will eliminate entitlement at an early age and help foster better manners. When they realize that no one will clean after them, that they have to do it themselves,
they will see other people as their equals.
So, for this reason, I think parents need to make sure their children will habitually clean up after themselves.
Another habit
they should develop is learning or studying on their own.
We should nurture independence in children while they are young and impressionable. Because, by the time they get to their teen years, it will be impossible to change them, which is why training them to study alone as early as possible as crucial for their development.
It will not only benefit them at that age
but for many years to come. I believe asking for help
when they can't do it by themselves is a practical habit. Kids need to know
they can count on us and that we'd be there if they need us.
We need to be available and ready
every time they call because if we let them down once, they may never trust us again.
모두 보기
단어 교정 보기
I think cleaning up after themselves should be part of their development.
This habit will eliminate entitlement at an early age and help Foster better manners when they realize that no one will kick in after them them, that they have to do it themselves.
They will see other people as their equals.
So for this reason, I think parents need to make sure their children will habitually clean up after themselves.
That's another habit.
They should develop as learning or studying on their own.
We should nurture Independence in children while they are young and impressionable Because by the time they get to their teen years, it will be impossible to change them them, which is why training them to study alone as early as possible as crucial for their development.
It will not only benefit them at that age.
But for many years to come home, I believe asking for help.
When they can't do it by themselves as a practical habit, kids need to know.
They can count on us and that we'd be there if they need us.
We need to be available and log.
He every time they call because if we let them down once they may never trust us again.
돌아가기
리얼프랙티스: IELTS 스피킹
Part 3
2/5
What habits should children have?

What habits should children have?

모범답안
연습하기
댓글을 등록 중입니다..

음성 댓글 남기기

 
사진 및 파일 첨부

여기에 파일을 끌어 놓거나 왼쪽의 버튼을 클릭하세요.

파일 용량 제한 : 0MB (허용 확장자 : *.*)

0개 첨부 됨 ( / )
Practice

What habits should children have?

0 SECS
90 SECS
Add comment
POST