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Describe a famous athlete you know
You should say:
Who he/she is
How you knew him/her
What he/she has achieved
And explain why he/she is famous

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Who doesn't know Kim Yuna, the queen of figure skating in my country?
This young and free-spirited athlete has put our country's name at the top of the sport. Even though she is now retired, her skills and performances were undisputed.
I first learned about her
when my best friend kept talking about her months before her performance in the 2010 Winter Olympics. Even though I was not a sports buff and I had little to no knowledge about this sport,
hearing that she also came from Gyeonggi Province
got me more interested in her. Hence,
we intended to skip our classes
just to see her perform on live national TV.
I barely know the rules are finer points of the sport and it was a first for me to see figure skating.
However, I was captivated by how
she glided on that marvelous ice rink with such finesse.
I did some digging about her life and career because I was quite curious how she was able to maintain that level of proficiency in that sport while juggling
her studies. Participating in that competition was like her destiny.
Going home with gold was so exciting for all of us here in South Korea. Before she came into the pictures,
nobody had made a tremendous mark for our country in figure skating.
Not only was it a remarkable Triumph for her, but it was also the nation's glory.
I think that competition the most pivotal part of her success. Apart from that, her dashing but well- reserved looks made me proud as a Korean because many foreigners were so amazed by how young and perfect she looked.
I can't thank her enough for in enduring all those sacrifices to land the title.
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Who doesn't know Kim Yuna Yuan the queen of figure skating in my country.
?
This This is young and free-spirited athlete has put our country's name at the top of the sport, even though she is now, retired from her skills and performances were Undisputed.
I first learned about her.
When my best friend kept talking about her months before her performance in the 2010, Winter Olympics, even though I am not a sports buff and I had little to no knowledge about this sport.
Hearing learning, that she also came from jongjit Jong-il Province.
Got I got me more interested in her, hence.
We intended to skip our classes.
Just to see her perform on live National TV.
I barely know the rules are finer points of the sport sport, and , and it was a first for me to see figure skating.
However, I was captivated, by the way.
She glided on that marvelous ice rink, with such finesse.
I did some digging about her life and career, because because I was quite curious how she was able to maintain that level of proficiency in that sport while job a job In her studies participating, in that competition was like her Destiny.
Going home with gold was so exciting for all of us here in South Korea before she came into the picture.
Nobody had made a tremendous Mark for our country and figure skating.
Not only was it a remarkable Triumph for her, but it was also the nation's Glory.
I think that competition the most pivotal part of her success, apart from that apart from that, her dashing, but well, reserved looks made me proud as a Korean because many foreigners were so amazed by how young and perfect, she look looks.
I can't thank her enough for in during all those sacrifices to land the title.
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Describe a famous athlete you know

Describe a famous athlete you know
You should say:
Who he/she is
How you knew him/her
What he/she has achieved
And explain why he/she is famous

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Describe a famous athlete you know
You should say:
Who he/she is
How you knew him/her
What he/she has achieved
And explain why he/she is famous

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