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Describe a person who often helps others.
You should say:
Who this person is
How this person helps others
Why this person helps others
And explain how you feel about this person

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I did a little research on this question because I don't know a lot of altruists from Korea.
I was surprised to find Lee ji Hoon on the list.
She is more popularly known as long you and she is a multi-awarded singer-and-actress her more well-known work in philanthropy is being an ambassador for Korea's anti-bullying campaign in schools for the deaf.
She was given an honorary title of a senior police officer.
However, there is more to her than meets the eye I found out that she has donated a lot of money to various charitable causes such as covid-19 relief charities for underprivileged children relief efforts for the victims of the gangwon forest fire.
She even has a Scholarship Foundation that provides financial aid to college students from needy families.
There are probably several reasons why she does this but I can only guess maybe she aspires to greater things than just being rich and famous.
Maybe it makes her feel good and gives her a sense of accomplishment.
It might even be a way to boost her image and her career.
I don't think there is anything wrong with whatever her motivation is dead.
What is important is that she touches the lives of many people in need and provides a good role model for people to follow
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I did a little research on this question because I don't know a lot of many altruists from Korea.
I was surprised to find Lee ji Jo Hoon Moon on the list.
She is more popularly known as long you and , and she is a multi-awarded singer-and-actress her more well-known work in philanthropy is being an ambassador for Korea's anti-bullying campaign in schools for the deaf.
She was given an honorary title of a senior police officer.
However, there is more to her than meets the eye I found out that she has donated a lot of money to various charitable causes such as covid-19 COVID-19 relief charities for underprivileged children relief efforts for the victims of the gangwon gang won forest fire.
She even has a Scholarship Foundation that provides financial aid to college students from needy families.
There are probably several reasons why she does this but , but I can only guess maybe she aspires to greater things than just being rich and famous.
Maybe it makes her feel good and gives her a sense of accomplishment.
It might even be a way to boost her image and her career.
I don't think there is anything wrong with whatever her motivation is dead.
What is important is that she touches the lives of many people in need and provides a good role model for people to follow follow.
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Describe a person who often helps others.

Describe a person who often helps others.
You should say:
Who this person is
How this person helps others
Why this person helps others
And explain how you feel about this person

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Describe a person who often helps others.
You should say:
Who this person is
How this person helps others
Why this person helps others
And explain how you feel about this person

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