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Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution
You should say:
Where it is
Why you visited this place
What kind of pollution you saw
And explain how you feel about it
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Pollution is one of the worst problems man has ever created and South Korea is not an exception are most serious environmental concern right now is the fine dust disaster.
This issue is very personal for me because it does not affect only one town or city, but the whole nation I visited many parts of Korea and I noticed that find us as a problem almost everywhere to varying degrees.
It is quite noticeable in Soul, which is my home City.
I can describe the fine dust air pollution as very similar to smoke which is a combination of smoke and fog.
However, this is worse than smog because the particles are larger so the air becomes dark and limits visibility.
This issue is very personal for me because it does not affect only one town or city, but the whole nation I visited many parts of Korea and I noticed that find us as a problem almost everywhere to varying degrees.
It is quite noticeable in Soul, which is my home City.
I can describe the fine dust air pollution as very similar to smoke which is a combination of smoke and fog.
However, this is worse than smog because the particles are larger so the air becomes dark and limits visibility.
The surroundings are so hazy that people especially the very young and the elderly need to wear face masks or stay indoors sadness and anger are my strongest emotions took over this environmental disaster.
I'm saddened because so many people are becoming sick.
The mortality rate is climbing for lung and cardiovascular diseases.
Then I get a quote because I feel that our government should move faster and take more decisive action.
I'm also upset with China because I heard that they are responsible for at least half of the fine dust pollen.
I hope that this problem is solved soon.
So people are free to breathe once more
I'm saddened because so many people are becoming sick.
The mortality rate is climbing for lung and cardiovascular diseases.
Then I get a quote because I feel that our government should move faster and take more decisive action.
I'm also upset with China because I heard that they are responsible for at least half of the fine dust pollen.
I hope that this problem is solved soon.
So people are free to breathe once more
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Pollution is one of the worst problems man has ever created and South Korea is not an exception are most serious environmental concern right now is the fine dust disaster.
This issue is very personal for me because it does not affect only one town or city, but the whole nation I visited many parts of Korea and I noticed that find us as a problem almost everywhere to varying degrees.
It is quite noticeable in Soul, which is my home City.
I can describe the fine dust air pollution as very similar to smoke which is a combination of smoke and fog.
However, this is worse than smog because the particles are larger so , so the air becomes dark and limits visibility.
The surroundings are so hazy that people especially the very young and the elderly need to wear face masks or stay indoors sadness and anger are my strongest emotions took over this environmental disaster.
I'm saddened because so many people are becoming sick.
The mortality rate is climbing for lung and cardiovascular diseases.
Then I get a quote because I feel that our government should move faster and take more decisive action.
I'm also upset with China because I heard that they are responsible for at least half of the fine dust pollen.
I hope that this problem is solved soon.
So people are free to breathe once more more.
This issue is very personal for me because it does not affect only one town or city, but the whole nation I visited many parts of Korea and I noticed that find us as a problem almost everywhere to varying degrees.
It is quite noticeable in Soul, which is my home City.
I can describe the fine dust air pollution as very similar to smoke which is a combination of smoke and fog.
However, this is worse than smog because the particles are larger so , so the air becomes dark and limits visibility.
The surroundings are so hazy that people especially the very young and the elderly need to wear face masks or stay indoors sadness and anger are my strongest emotions took over this environmental disaster.
I'm saddened because so many people are becoming sick.
The mortality rate is climbing for lung and cardiovascular diseases.
Then I get a quote because I feel that our government should move faster and take more decisive action.
I'm also upset with China because I heard that they are responsible for at least half of the fine dust pollen.
I hope that this problem is solved soon.
So people are free to breathe once more more.
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Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution
Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution
You should say:
Where it is
Why you visited this place
What kind of pollution you saw
And explain how you feel about it
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Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution
You should say:
Where it is
Why you visited this place
What kind of pollution you saw
And explain how you feel about it
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